Effectiveness...

this is a short but sweet post...

Remember it's always more effective to say "He crunched his fists together" than to just say "He grew angry!"

better to say "He pee'd his pants" than to say "He was scared!"

better to say "She screamed and clutched her hand" than to say "She got hurt in the hand"

better to say "Ge smiled brightly as she walked away" than to say "he was happy after seeing her"

Show me things I would normally see on a TV screen or in an anime, not something that can only be read...