Well due to may dis-satisfaction with Green Success, in particular Chapters 3 - 5... I've decided to wipe those completely... My goal is simple, I will re-tell the same story and events, only in a way that saves time...
and also, one thing that makes these specific chapters so boring... THERE'S NO CONFLICT!!!
I loved chapter 2 so much because there was a problem they had to overcome... watching the first episodes of: Soul Eater, Negima, Air, Clannad, Cowboy Bebop, and countless other anime... I've studied them all, and so far, all of them have one thing in common.... a main conflict...
I've reviewed chapters 3 - 5 of Green SUccess, and so far, it's just pure story telling and hinting... with little conflict and really no main conflict...
So that's my goal.. re write these, telling the same story in a more interesting way!
Of course this will probably ruin my copyright as in this is not a minor change...
but who cares, my mom is the one who's in charge of copyright stuff... she's the one who got me the copyright in the first place... saying If I don't publish a novel before I reach 18 or before I graduate college, I'm moving out!
Every logical person knows it's actually better to be a loser living with their parents than a "cool guy" living alone, paying bills and things... most people know it's best to live with your parents as long as possible...
but once I get enough money.. I"m out of there!!!
I thought Green Success was pretty good. It's your call though. Most the early chapters of a book are just intro.
ReplyDeleteNegima was mainly dull until the Kyoto arc in the anime version. The second anime was much more interesting. However, for that series, they really did leave out good things that can only be found in the manga.
That's a pretty strict mother. You technically don't need to register for copyright until everything is ready for publication. I just post things online, such as excerpts, so people know what my ideas, as well as the fact that they belong to me. My facebook fans know my ideas, people on Wattpad know my ideas, and my upcoming books are listed on my author website.
Yeah your right... You know, another reason why I love FMA so much, every episode has it;s own conflict which is resolved... you could watch each episode as a stand alone story...
ReplyDeleteI guess that's why I can re-watch the episodes so many times without getting bored!
That's very true.
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